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Deep thunder rolls

Deep thunder rolls as the temperature drops ever so slightly. A cool breeze flows through the open windows. I rush to shut off the lights and twist open the blinds just enough to see the sky – another far off rumble. I wait in silence for a spark to illuminate the heavens. My patience is rewarded with a furious and dazzling flash. I count out the seconds before the thunder tumbles in. The distance is still large. It is followed by a great silence, as if all of nature hushed in respect to the oncoming power. Everything is still. I hear the sound of rushed footsteps passing by trying to outrun the downpour, as others shut their windows. The smell of new rain precedes the droplets. A patter fills the air as the leaves dance with each raindrop’s descent. The sound grows as the rain seeks out every corner – it now permeates the air. Jagged white tears in the sky trigger brighter flashes. A sudden clap of thunder overpowers all other sounds for a brief moment, giving way to the crescendo of the rain tapping perpetually. The water begins to satiate the soil and blanket the sidewalks and roads – the asphalt glimmers under the golden glow of the streetlights. Another sequence of blazing light fills the air and penetrates the room – the resulting rumble enters from all around. The storm is near…

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3 comments

1 Christine { 07.17.07 at 9:13 am }

You certainly come from a writer family… I was almost sad I missed it (when was this storm and how DID I miss it??).
I saw the coolest storms ever last summer, when from the roof deck we could see them rolling in from every direction. It was the most amazing lightning I had ever seen!! And it’s really cool to watch them at work from the 32nd floor of the Hancock too. Although they slightly scare me… Storms are awesome!!

2 Judy { 07.19.07 at 8:08 am }

Pablo that is a beautiful and lyrical piece. Write on! and keep everything you write… You never know when you can use it in a novel or short story.
Love
Mom

3 Andrik { 07.23.07 at 12:56 am }

I remember the first summer I spent in Chicago… I was amazed that it could rain in the summer. In LA, the summer means dryness. No humidity and no rain.

Of course, it also means to awe-inspiring thunderstorms. I don’t know what the rainy season will be like in the Bay Area, but I hope there are a few lighting crashes and spectacular booms.

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